Started in October. Admitted to Brown ED.
Profile
Senior, 3.95 UW GPA, 1520 SAT. Strong extracurriculars but no clear narrative tying them together. Came to us 3 weeks before the Early Decision deadline.
What we did
Rebuilt her personal statement from scratch around a through-line we identified in her activities. Rewrote 4 supplemental essays. Repositioned her activity list to emphasize depth over breadth.
Result
Admitted to Brown University, Early Decision.